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Monty Python and the Holy Grail (1975)

30/11/2012

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King Arthur has just cut the Black Knight's last leg off.

BLACK KNIGHT
All right, we'll call it a draw.

KING ARTHUR
(preparing to leave)
Come, Patsy.

King Arthur and Patsy ride off.

BLACK KNIGHT
(calling after King Arthur)
Oh, oh, I see! Running away, eh? You yellow bastards! Come back
here and take what's coming to you! I'll bite your legs off!
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The NeverEnding Story (1984)

30/11/2012

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G'MORK!
G'MORK
If you come any closer, I will rip you to shreds.

ATREYU
Who are you?

G'MORK
I am G'mork. And you, whoever you are, can have the honor of being my last victim.

ATREYU
I will not die easily. I am a warrior!

G'MORK
Ha! Brave warrior, then fight the Nothing.

ATREYU
But I can't! I can't get beyond the boundaries of Fantasia!

G'mork laughs and Atreyu gets angry.

ATREYU
What's so funny about that?

G'MORK
Fantasia has no boundaries.

Laughs.

ATREYU
That's not true! You're lying.

G'MORK
Foolish boy. Don't you know anything about Fantasia? It's the world of human fantasy. Every part, every creature of it, is a piece of the dreams and hopes of mankind. Therefore, it has no boundaries.
ATREYU
But why is Fantasia dying, then?

G'MORK
Because people have begun to lose their hopes and forget their dreams. So the Nothing grows stronger.

ATREYU
What is the Nothing?

G'MORK
It's the emptiness that's left. It's like a despair, destroying this world. And I have been trying to help it.

ATREYU
But why?

G'MORK
Because people who have no hopes are easy to control; and whoever has the control... has the power!

ATREYU
Who are you, really?

G'MORK
I am the servant of the power behind the Nothing. I was sent to kill the only one who could have stopped the Nothing. I lost him in the Swamps of Sadness. His name... was Atreyu.

The ground shakes again and Atreyu is knocked down. He grabs a knife shaped piece of broken stone and stands, ready to fight.

ATREYU
If we're about to die anyway, I'd rather die fighting! Come for me, G'mork! *I* am Atreyu!
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Screenwriting -- Character flaws and character goals

30/11/2012

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  • What does your main character want?
  • What are their goals?
  • What or who is stopping the main character from getting what he or she wants/needs?
  • What's getting in their way of achieving these goals?
  • What flaws does your main character (secondary characters) have?
  • What must the main character or characters overcome to achieve these goals?

One of the things I see a lot of in amateur screenplays, and in my own writing, if I'm honest, and it's a big thing, is a lack of character goals. There aren't any goals for the main character or characters to achieve. This leads to a story without any defined and clear direction. And generally the scenes that play out within the context of that story tend to meander and not actually go anywhere.

Giving the main character a goal to achieve will help structure the story that you want to tell, it will help drive the story forward and give it a sense of direction.

Character flaws and goals can generally be broken down into two categories.

Firstly, there's the INTERNAL struggle that the character is going through.

The internal struggle that the main character is going through usually revolves around some kind of personality trait. This personality trait is the character's flaw, it's their achille's heel that's stopping them from moving forward in their life.

This character flaw could be caused by a whole number of things.

  • A bad divorce.
  • Bullied at school.
  • Just broke up with their partner.
  • A death in the family.
  • Maybe they caused the death of someone.

This major event (something bad happened to them) caused them to take on this negative personality trait. They're finding it difficult to get over what happened to them. They might not even be aware of this personality trait (flaw) that they have until it's pointed out to them or something happens (usually something bad) to them that brings it to their attention.

This is their INTERNAL struggle.

This internal struggle that manifests itself in the main character as a flaw could take the form of any number of personality traits.

  • Selfish.
  • Selfless.
  • Uncaring.
  • Egotistical.
  • Womanizer.
  • Irresponsible.
  • Maybe they lie all the time.
  • Likes being in control (control freak) all of the time.
  • Cowardly
  • They haven't grown up and still act like a kid.

There are so many to choose from. The list is endless.

Go to character flaws

Over the course of a story, the main character learns to overcome this negative aspect of their personality and hopefully by the end of the story they will be the opposite of how they were at the beginning. If they were irresponsible at the start, they have now learned to become responsible. If they were selfish, they have now learned to be more giving by the end of the story. They have learned something about themselves, their personality has arced over the course of the story. They may not even be aware that they have changed.

But as the reader/audience member, we have seen this change occur.

Secondly, there's the EXTERNAL struggles that characters find themselves in which are usually much easier to see.

  • Guy gets girl, guy loses girl, guy has to win girl back.
  • Beating the bad guys.
  • Saving the hostages.
  • Defeating the bad ass monster.

Generally, and this is just my own point of view. Dependent on the genre, certain films require that characters are flawed, otherwise those movies just aren't going to work. These are usually character driven pieces, and certainly not your tent-pole summer blockbusters. Generally in these types of movies I just want to be entertained, as long as the story makes sense and the characters don't behave in a stupid manner.

When it comes to a character driven story, I want to see a lot of depth to characters. This is when I want to see characters change over the course of a movie, and the more characters that have some kind of character arc, the better. This is when I want to feel something and possibly even relate to the characters and their struggles in some way. I want to feel their pain and anguish that they go through over the course of the story. This is when I want to be emotionally invested in the characters and the story and situations they find themselves in. And of course, I still want to be entertained with a story that makes sense.

N.B.

  • INTERNAL GOALS
  • EXTERNAL GOALS

Make sure there are obstacles that get in the way of your characters achieving their goals. Hopefully this will create conflict for your character(s) to overcome.

This is just my take on how I approach my writing.

Movies to check out:

  1. Lost in Translation (2003)
  2. Where the Wild Things Are (2009)
  3. Slumdog Millionaire (2008)
  4. Little Miss Sunshine (2006)
  5. It's a Wonderful Life (1946)
  6. The Virgin Suicides (1999)
  7. Heavenly Creatures (1994)
  8. Sideways (2004)
  9. The Wrestler (2008)
  10. Juno (2007)

There are loads more.

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Dirty Harry (1971)

28/11/2012

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HARRY CALLAHAN
I know what you're thinking. "Did he fire six shots or only
five?" Well, to tell you the truth, in all this excitement I
kind of lost track myself. But being as this is a .44 Magnum,
the most powerful handgun in the world, and would blow your
head clean off, you've got to ask yourself one question:
Do I feel lucky? Well, do ya, punk?
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Screenwriting -- What if money was no object? -- What do you desire?

28/11/2012

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If there's something you want to do -- just DO IT.
Keep writing -- Keep plugging away -- DON'T GIVE UP

ALAN WATTS
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Witness (1985)

28/11/2012

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JOHN BOOK
Lady, you take my picture with that thing and I'm
gonna rip your brassiere off... and strangle you with
it! You got that? 
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Writing -- Ten rules for writing fiction

26/11/2012

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Ian Rankin
  1. Read lots.
  2. Write lots.
  3. Learn to be self-critical.
  4. Learn what criticism to accept.
  5. Be persistent.
  6. Have a story worth telling.
  7. Don't give up.
  8. Know the market.
  9. Get lucky.
  10. Stay lucky.
Ten rules for writing fiction: Part One
Ten rules for writing fiction: Part Two

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Screenwriting -- Nobody Knows Anything

25/11/2012

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Nobody sets out to fuck up your movie. It’s not like the director or the stars wake up in the morning and say, “Let’s screw up this scene. How can I really cause Bill Goldman pain?” It’s just that they’re terrified. I wrote a line once that caught on out there in Hollywood: “Nobody knows anything.” And they don’t. If we knew what we were doing, every movie would be wonderful. If actors knew what they were doing, every performance would be just swell. It’s a crapshoot. It just is. There’s no answer. I wish there were.

WILLIAM GOLDMAN

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Dallas (1978)

24/11/2012

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JR EWING
Sue Ellen, you're not a wife, you're not a
mother, and you sure as hell are not a
Ewing!
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The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey (2012) Fan Trailer and TV Spot Re-Edit

24/11/2012

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RADAGAST
A dark power has found a way back into the world.
Looking forward to this.  Peter Jackson did a superb job on The Lord of the Rings Trilogy.  I hope it stays true to the book.
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Aliens (1986)

23/11/2012

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HUDSON
Look, I'm telling ya, there's somethin' movin' and it
ain't us! Tracker's off scale, man. They're all around
us, man. Jesus!
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Star Wars -- A New Hope 1977 Trailer

22/11/2012

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The Show Must Go On
DARTH VADER
I've been waiting for you, Obi-Wan. We meet again, at
last. The circle is now complete. When I left you, I was
but the learner; now *I* am the master.

OBI-WAN
Only a master of evil, Darth.

Lightsabers clash
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Flash Gordon (1980)

22/11/2012

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PRINCE VULTAN
GORDON'S ALIVE!
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Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (2001)

21/11/2012

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DUMBLEDORE
It takes a great deal of bravery to stand up to
your enemies, but a great deal more to stand
up to your friends.
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Screenwriting News -- Writers for the new Star Wars movies

21/11/2012

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Looks like Disney have found the screenwriters for the upcoming Star Wars movies.

Michael Arndt --  Episode 7
Lawrence Kasdan -- Episode 8
Simon Kinberg -- Episode 9

Glad to see Lawrence Kasdan back in the game. 

It's also great to see they're planning on releasing the new episodes two years apart from each other.  Three years apart is pushing it, especially these days.  And anything longer than that, is just plain ludicrous.

Hopefully they'll get Steven Spielberg on board in some capacity.

Looking forward to watching them.  Let's hope they stay true to the original Star Wars universe and mythology.

Go to Den of Geek.
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Needful Things (1993)

19/11/2012

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LELAND GAUNT
The young carpenter from Nazareth? I know
him well. Promising young man. He died badly.
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Something Wicked This Way Comes (1983)

17/11/2012

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CHARLES HALLOWAY
Sometimes a man can learn more form other men's dreams
than he can from his own. Come visit me, sir, if you wish to
improve your education.
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American Pie (1999)

12/11/2012

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STIFLER'S MOM
I got some scotch.

FINCH
Single malt?

STIFLER'S MOM
Aged eighteen years. The way I like it.
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80s TV Shows that need a MOVIE

11/11/2012

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MAGNUM PI
Magnum PI
AIRWOLF
Picture
BUCK ROGERS IN THE 25th CENTURY

Picture
MACGYVER

Picture
MAX HEADROOM

Max Headroom
THUNDERCATS

Thundercats
QUANTUM LEAP

Quantum Leap
KNIGHT RIDER

knight Rider
ULYSSES 31

Ulysses 31
BATTLE OF THE PLANETS (Gatchaman)

Battle of the Planets
ROBOTECH

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The Last of the Mohicans (1992)

11/11/2012

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HAWKEYE
No, you submit, do you hear? You be strong, you
survive... You stay alive, no matter what occurs!
I will find you. No matter how long it takes, no matter
how far, I will find you.
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London Screenwriters' Festival 2012 -- 50 Kisses Competition

11/11/2012

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Cool short movie made for the 50 Kisses Competition.
NEIL
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World War Z -- Looks Badass!  Zombies -- they're coming!

8/11/2012

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Now -- This looks badass!
This is looking good.  I'm glad they've gone with some serious action. 

It's time to kick ass and chew bubble gum... and I'm all outta gum.
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Disney -- Star Wars -- Who's going to write the scripts and who's going to direct?

8/11/2012

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Just heard a rumor that Michael Arndt of Little Miss Sunshine and Toy Story 3 fame is being brought on board.  That's rather good news.  I don't know how factual these rumors are.  If true, this is a great choice.  He's extremely good and will certainly do the movies justice.  Apparently he's also written a 40-50 page treatment which is even better.  I'm pretty sure he's a Star Wars fan.  Huge fan of his work.  As for directors, I wonder if Steven Spielberg would consider taking the movies on?  This would be very cool.

Michael Arndt Writes 'Star Wars: Episode VII' Treatment
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Star Wars -- Disney -- Who's going to write the scripts?

8/11/2012

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That's a big question. And a big ask.

Who could do the Star Wars universe and the mythology that surrounds it real justice?

Now that the big man himself, George Lucas has passed on the mantle.
Picture
I grew up for the most part on the original trilogy. They're the films that got me into movies in the first place. They set a benchmark for others to follow. There are few films that can rival them.

This would be a role with great privilege, but it comes with a lot of responsibility to take on as well.

Because, if you get it wrong. You'll be in a whole heap of trouble.

Whoever Disney decide to get on board for these projects. They will need to do some thorough research into what the writer/writers can bring to the table.

  • What's their track record?
  • What movies have they written before?
  • How well do they know the Star Wars universe and mythology?
  • How dedicated will they be to carry on with what George Lucas created?

Picking someone just because they happen to be the writer who's in with the crowd in my mind would be the wrong way to go.

They must know the Star Wars universe inside out and they must have passion. Real passion to want to make it work on all levels. A fly by night approach isn't going to cut it. The writer/writers will need to show that they care and want to do justice to what's gone before.

The five writers who I think should be considered for the role:

  • Lawrence Kasdan
  • Ted Elliot and Terry Rossio
  • JJ Abrams
  • Joss Whedon
  • Andy & Lana Wachowski

There are possibly a few others that could be brought to the table.

But as a writer who gets offered this role. You're going to need to show that you really care and are in love with the source material. Old and new. And there's a lot of Star Wars material out there. Lots and lots of source material, new and old to work from.

Disney have their work cut out and they are going to have to take this into consideration when they interview writers for these projects.

I certainly don't envy the decision makers.

I forgot about Peter Jackson.  Although he is busy with The Hobbit.  But he'd do a great job with story and directing.  A very passionate film maker.

  • Pixar should also be brought on board to do an animated trilogy. 
  • The Thrawn Trilogy (Heir to the Empire) springs to mind.
  • Bring back as many of the the original cast to voice the characters.

May the Force be with you.
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Star Wars: Episode VI - Return of the Jedi (1983)

6/11/2012

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IMPERIAL OFFICER
You rebel scum.
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